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« on: January 02, 2015, 05:41:41 PM »

MOTHERLAND NEWS no.3

If you apreciate or like my works plz CLICK HERE and vote Izzy

Motherland NEWS no.3, l2 queen ant drop, lineage 2 gamecoast

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« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2015, 05:51:12 PM »

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« Reply #2 on: January 03, 2015, 01:07:20 PM »

Dlx interview next.
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« Reply #3 on: January 03, 2015, 03:59:42 PM »

I tryed with hero ol/ee/cardi but they don't answer me at pm....I think they don't know english...
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« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2015, 07:06:09 PM »

I tryed with hero ol/ee/cardi but they don't answer me at pm....I think they don't know english...

L1ght knows English, I can try to find contact. (If it's the same guy as from 15x)
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« Reply #5 on: January 04, 2015, 05:57:10 AM »

maybe proofreading u'r documents be4 posting for typing/english mistakes would help ....
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« Reply #6 on: January 04, 2015, 01:02:54 PM »

I like the idea - I would gladly read some important news on events on the server (like what clan achieved/won something important, who enchanted some OP weapon, what CP got banned etc.).

A few tips though:
1. Heroes, not heros.
2. When you are about to make screenshot, turn off spell check so Word won't underline every second word. Though I believe printing document into PDF file will be much better to read - user won't need to click each page individually to open.
3. Better font formatting, e.g. nicks in interview could be bolded.
4. Double check for typos.

Keep up!
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« Reply #7 on: January 04, 2015, 01:45:40 PM »

Tnx for advice but how you see i made 2x post one with big image  and  with1x small Smiley

I will try in the next number to have more attention at details...
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« Reply #8 on: January 04, 2015, 02:21:05 PM »


2. When you are about to make screenshot, turn off spell check so Word won't underline every second word.


This and in general, try to work with your text to make it as good as possible for reading. U know there are many of you trying to win this event and competition is high. I personally like the news cause I am not playing and it's always nice to see what is going on but I think it's a pity to participate like this when it could be much better. Intentions are not to criticize you to make you feel bad, just some advice because I am a fan of this idea.
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« Reply #9 on: January 04, 2015, 03:04:09 PM »

I am a fan of this idea.

Not a fan of me? I see how it is (
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« Reply #10 on: January 04, 2015, 03:18:56 PM »

I am a fan of this idea.

Not a fan of me? I see how it is (

You are, my dear friend, undercover and I cannot express admiration. Of course, it can be changed, when my name appears in your story  Grin
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« Reply #11 on: January 04, 2015, 03:23:16 PM »

Muhahaha epic Smiley) so shizz your new story must to be with poissie. Dlx know english but he don't have time to answer me i will try to talk with him later or tommorow
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« Reply #12 on: January 04, 2015, 03:53:40 PM »

I am a fan of this idea.

Not a fan of me? I see how it is (

You are, my dear friend, undercover and I cannot express admiration. Of course, it can be changed, when my name appears in your story  Grin

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« Reply #13 on: January 19, 2015, 06:54:01 AM »

Nice work, I was going to do the stats for the Olym too (I actually did already but found this forum just now).
With some grammar  correction, I think you will be just fine! Keep up  Cheesy
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